i had just posted this but i left out the published part in the actual question...that greatly changed the answers. here is the same poem and play critic if you don't mind...rate it, tear it apart i don't care. i just need honest feedback...well here is one of my poems...
strangers that we meet
but only do we greet
stay as a stranger
and seem like a danger
we do not build the trust
and rarely do we thrust
our soul into the hole
of their heart
strangers that we meet
but only do we greet
stay as a stranger
and seem like a danger
we do not build the trust
and rarely do we thrust
our soul into the hole
of their heart