Do i have a shot at poetry?

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Nick

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I just started pulling it out of thin air really.
This is my first poem, Do you Guys think i might have a shot
in poetry as a career?
Well enough Rambling on here it go's


dieing in vein
Dieing for true
Dieing for fame
Dieing for you
The that day come's
The day that dies
We all never know
We will always never
For all i know love is forever
and so its true
and so are you
For a last prayer
For the last dare
All is well for me and you
One last word before i go
Love is forever and so is are's
 
i'm going to be blunt... this poem isn't that good, sorry... you'll need to try way harder if you want it as a career. Well, the above depends actually, you'll have to tell me how old you are first. If you're in high school, the poem isn't good. sorry, please don't be discouraged.
 
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