Curious on opinions/critisizm (poem)?

Zack

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(Not about me, I just take a fancy to unhappy poetry)
Too many thoughts to handle,
Too much to take at once.
Thoughts well inside my mind,
I thirst for eternal silence.

How long must I wait,
Wait with all this pain.
Before it goes away,
Before you know my shame.

I've been holding back,
Holding my heart, my love.
There's much I need to say,
But little I can do.

You mean it all, you make me live,
I wish you could take this love I give.
It is a pity, it is a shame,
Because you love another, my heart is in disdain.

Yet I will live on,
Still nice to be with you.
I'll keep hiding my love,
Maybe one day I can be true.
 
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