Critique on song lyrics please?

Tana

New member
The song title is Crazy.
It's like the... fifth, I think, song I wrote.
Most of them I don't want to put up here. xD

They’re watching me
From beyond the trees
This won’t go away
‘Cause the end never ends it
They’ll follow me
From beyond the trees
They don’t wanna leave
And the end never ends it

They’ll use me
To get their way
They’ll abuse me
To get their way
And it’s never gonna stop
‘Cause the end never ends it

They say they want to help
But they don’t know it’s too late
You can’t save me
My body is aching
And now it’s breaking

They tell me it’s not there
You can’t see
The torture in my mind
My fucking mind
My body is aching
And now it’s breaking

They’ll use me
To get their way
They’ll abuse me
To get their way
And it’s never gonna stop
‘Cause the end never ends it

Now I’m crazy
I’m insane
I’m psychotic
I’m mentally deranged
They’re not leaving
And the end never ends it
They’re still screaming
The end won’t end this
 
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