Critique Needed For Short Horror Story?

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Okay so I wrote amazing and terryfing short story horror for a competition but it didn't win ... apparently some people weren't likin' it! Tell me what you think should be improved, though I think it's amazing. Warning: Low-Level Violence

http://www.geocities.com/horrorboard/thegardener.html
 
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