Criticism please. Do you like this poem?

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I’m a real big fan of yours
But I’m quite a joke to you
So was it a joke when you met me
And put me where you wanted me to be
You see

I’m a little bit insecure
When it comes to love & its intricate games
But you see I’m done playing it right now
Curtains closing, starting to take my bow
So will you be a spectator of this
Or will you let me go

Ah yo
La di ah yo
I’m thinking it’s time to let go
You see
In a way I’ve been drifting down a river to no where
But it might just be a new way to bear
My hopelessness I’ve been trying to show

So as we close
And try to bear with what’s unknown
Hopefully through the choppy waters you will hold my hand
And I can still be your biggest fan
This is a song that I just wrote. I play acoustic guitar.
 
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