Criticism encouraged! Opinions on my short story for a writing contest?

AmandaPanda

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okay so i just realized that my deadline for my short story is TOMORROW
Im in an English Honours class and handing in an entry for the writing contest is mandatory so it might not be the best but it makes the teacher happy and no marks so whatever.

and i needa hand it in to the teacher after lunch so i need u guys to gimme some feedback on my story SO FAR

thanks!!!!

go to: amandadasinger.blogspot.com

and i will have my story there (:
thanks!!
if you think I'm missing anything just say so and I can add anything in but i have a 600 word max so I can't have too much stuff in there.

AND What do you guys think of the title?
maybe a different title is better?
criticism is highly encouraged!!!
 
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