Could you please critique my acrostic poem for a new Grandchild?

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Longcloud White

New member
Just a tiny bundle of joy;
A darling and sweet little boy.
X chromosomes I think are best;
Oh joy; I am now three times blessed.
Now a Nana; I’m delighted.

Our wonderful son has a son;
Love and caring has just begun.
I vow I will always cherish,
Verily; until I perish,
Evermore this wonderful child;
Resting so beautifully mild.

His loving Pa and Grandmother,
Adore this gift, like no other.
Read our thanks seen in this poem
Then open up this jeroboam!
 
That is beautiful ! I'm sure your son and his wife will love it :)

Please answer mine? :) http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AnVYF9X2o9xj9f0RaQ1AUnrsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20110408174906AAhahpj
 
Jeroboam...? But either way, that was really sweet. Gifts from the heart are always the best. It really shows how much you care. It's something that only that child will have; I think he'll treasure that for his entire life.
 
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