Could you please correct this note if it needs any corrections/improvements?...

runny

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...[10 points]? In my previous email I had thought that he had given me A wrongly cause I actually thought he would give me A+ according to the evaluations he had done on my projects. I had asked him about my correct final grade, now that he has not replied my email. I know what it means and I have written the email below. Does it need correction/improvements?
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Dear Professor Johnson,

I would just like to appoligize for that I asked about my final grade in my previous email from you. I just thought the system might had been showing it wrongly. However, I am truly happy with my grade and I hope I did not sound as if I was claiming for more grade to you. Not only this grade is good and fair, but also grade is actually really trivial compared to the priceless help and support I found myself having as a graduate student in your class. I appreciate all your help and support again, would like to thank you once again, and appologize if I could not be as good as I was supposed to be.

Merry Christmas and have a nice holiday.

Best regards,
Maria
 
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