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Indiana Jones

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John had a friendly relationship with his street beggar man. When John’s mom heard about his friendship with the beggar man she warned and shouted at john to break up his friendship with him.

John didn’t take his mom words serious and started moving closely with the beggar. One day, John took the beggar man to his home. When his Mom opened the door she was shocked to see the beggar man with his son and immediately she shouted at John for his behavior. The beggar man slowly said the mom that he came to their home only because he loves John and his relationship. Within a few seconds the beggar man started leaving their house.

Angry John shouted at his mom and said that none of his relations were not near to them and even his father is in abroad and the beggar man is just like his grandfather that why he moves with him closely and he is really a nice man.

Mom explained that it’s difficult to judge the person from their talks and exterior view. In this cunning world anything could happen and from her point of view the beggar man just look like a child kidnapper. Finally she warned John to stay away from him.

John and her mom went to the nearby park at the same evening. When john was busy playing with the skid, his mother was busy talking with her neighbors. Noticing that, a young man came himself to John and gave him a biscuit and said it was from abroad which tastes good. John was about to eat it when the beggar man interrupts him. The beggar man quickly asked to throw away the biscuit and said that was a biscuit which could makes him faint. The beggar man pointed out the person and said he was a kidnapper and he used this biscuit to kidnap the children. John’s mom was noticing all that and thought to herself that if the beggar man was not on time her boy would be kidnapped. From that day her mom allowed John to maintain his relationship with the beggar man.


Guys, This is my current level in english. Please tell me how am I doing. So that I can improve myself.
 
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