?TWILIGHT LOVER?
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It's not that good. It's about the wind. Well, here is my poem. Can you help me with the punctuation to? I'm not very good with punctuation in poems cause' I don't know where anything goes.
I blow unseen in the sky,
I blow between the trees,
I sweep the clouds away
I throw the leaves all around,
All day and night I go unnoticed
Whoosh! I go past many faces
I wish someone could see me
Company is my only longing
“Look at me!” I scream, but no one seems to hear
“Can you not feel my breeze?” I question everyday
Everyday I sit alone waiting to be noticed
But when I am angry, I unleash a storm
I blow unseen in the sky,
I blow between the trees,
I sweep the clouds away
I throw the leaves all around,
All day and night I go unnoticed
Whoosh! I go past many faces
I wish someone could see me
Company is my only longing
“Look at me!” I scream, but no one seems to hear
“Can you not feel my breeze?” I question everyday
Everyday I sit alone waiting to be noticed
But when I am angry, I unleash a storm