Correct my 2nd poem please?

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My One and Only

Days pass by,
as I reminisce,
the times I sigh,
as I remember this.

Days pass by,
tears have drip drop.
I will never cry,
until these feelings stop.

Add or replace any mistakes, correction is appreciated!
 
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