Coronor...a free verse poem...what do you think?

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mtheoryrules

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Coroner

Poetry is
a lifeless corpse now
that I defile
without regret
it's innocence
is whole again

Poetry is
a cadaver
that does not object
as I explore
my own depravity
but not at it's expense

Poetry is
a carcass
stiff yet forced
to comply
and my imagination
is set to fire

Poetry is
dead
completely
and in full
but still
it looks gorgeous
to me
my morbid curiosity
 
Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored topics. A good thing! Poetry needs an uppish, still kind approach! Plus "she" does not gets annoyed by you, you being so kind as not to offend her. A priest (a coroner you say) offering his eulogy over a dead nymph. That's how I receive it. Good work, still lacks of the explanation of "why".
 
Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored topics. A good thing! Poetry needs an uppish, still kind approach! Plus "she" does not gets annoyed by you, you being so kind as not to offend her. A priest (a coroner you say) offering his eulogy over a dead nymph. That's how I receive it. Good work, still lacks of the explanation of "why".
 
Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored topics. A good thing! Poetry needs an uppish, still kind approach! Plus "she" does not gets annoyed by you, you being so kind as not to offend her. A priest (a coroner you say) offering his eulogy over a dead nymph. That's how I receive it. Good work, still lacks of the explanation of "why".
 
Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored topics. A good thing! Poetry needs an uppish, still kind approach! Plus "she" does not gets annoyed by you, you being so kind as not to offend her. A priest (a coroner you say) offering his eulogy over a dead nymph. That's how I receive it. Good work, still lacks of the explanation of "why".
 
Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored topics. A good thing! Poetry needs an uppish, still kind approach! Plus "she" does not gets annoyed by you, you being so kind as not to offend her. A priest (a coroner you say) offering his eulogy over a dead nymph. That's how I receive it. Good work, still lacks of the explanation of "why".
 
Again a hard subject! Impressive approach, but why? Why is poetry dead? It reminds me of lyrics from good new wave groups. The 2nd strophe is the better one! I try to approach it from your point of view, still, I think you are overconfident of your poetic ability and you challenge unexplored topics. A good thing! Poetry needs an uppish, still kind approach! Plus "she" does not gets annoyed by you, you being so kind as not to offend her. A priest (a coroner you say) offering his eulogy over a dead nymph. That's how I receive it. Good work, still lacks of the explanation of "why".
 
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