comments on poem please?

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you stuck on your shoes and headed for the door
where you were going you wern't to sure.
i will follow you if you want to lead
when your cut i'll be the one to bleed
if you fall i'll give you a hand up
when your thirsty i'll refill your cup.

the doors been opened just walk through
you'll find a place where your dreams come true.

you stuck on your coat and headed for the road
what lies ahead is happyness growing old.
i will follow you if you want me to
when your down i'll be the one blue
if you fade i'll fill in the colors
when your lonely i'll find you others.

the doors been opened just walk through
you'll find a place where your dreams come true.
 
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