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I'll miss you

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Riddle

I live in you
I'm false and I'm true
You can't see me, I'm invisible
I am weak but invisible
From the beat of a broken heart
Or the feelings I take
I'll tear down, build up, and remake
I can thrive in you
And the souls I'm supressing
A sting from a bee
And an angels carressing
I open your eyes to expieriences new
But in the process I'll completly blind you
I'm Hell from below
And Heaven above
What am I?

I am love...
 
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