COMMENTS AND CRITCS PEOPLE!!! WHAT DO YA'LL THINK ABOUT MY POEM?

Blurry images surround my eyes
Letting me know it’s just a dream
But so real it seems
Turn to the right and famous people
Pictures in which they took for success
This hall is where people are the best
I walk down further
Awards I began to see
My name was on one
Is this for me?
A paper that looks 20 years old
Air tight in a frame
I see myself smiling and then I see my name
My famous signature scribbles the bottom
Realizing I’m the last knowing the last the best
A dream it seemed, but heart jumped out my chest
A life that seems so alternate from mine
A dream I want to be a reality
My picture in the hall of fame
 
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