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Moment of Bliss,
Tumbling over,
Falling forever,
Ending, never,

Coil in torment ,
Shame and stupidity,
Wasted time,
Reduced in Pity,

Moping mumbles,
Sobbing slumbers,
Body aches ,
Diseased shakes,

Unbearable pain,
Broken dreams ,
Lonely forever,
Love, never

Loving, insanity
Loved, serenity
 
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