Comment on poem please?

Riin

New member
and marzipan kisses.
Sweet lattice heartbeats,
and rose paper blushes.

Ice lacing touches,
on cool, melting bodies.
Lingering smiles,
With the thoughts of a child.

Blue crescent glass,
and ice sugar silk.
She with the warmth of the sun.
The skin of milk.
 
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