comment on my poem?? how should i finish it?=]?

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i see your eyes.
so unforgivable,
so condescending
of everything i did.

i hear your words.
cutting through me,
breakin down every defenses.
it was all i had.

i feel your hands.
just itching to touch me,
impatient to satiate your need.
why do you want me so?

i sense you behind me.
weak and silent.
wanting and waiting
for me to notice you.
 
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