Comment on my poem- 3 Words?

Mike

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At this point in time I want to say those three magic words
But fear restrains me every time
Fear of you ignoring; neglecting these three strong words
I fear that once these words touch my lips and are airborne
There is no way to take them back
I fear that you will say “oh” or “cool”
Because the only good response to this is those three words with a “too” on the end
If you say those three words with a “too” on the end
F*ck cloud 9; I would shoot straight up to cloud 2 trillion
But if you didn’t say those three words back with a “too” on the end
I would want to go straight down; 6 feet under
Because these three words are the toughest three words to say
It’s do or die
Sometimes people casually throw this saying around
But when I look into your beautiful blue eyes and stroke your vibrant blonde hair
I mean it when I say this
My heart skips a beat just thinking about saying it
My palms get sweaty and I can no longer sleep
The thought blocks out all other thoughts
All I want to do is say it to you
So I look into your eyes
My face so close to yours
Swallow hard one last time
And I finally say these three extremely powerful words
“I Love You”
 
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