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nikkx11
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so i am just starting to write my college essay, i couldn't think of what to write it about but then i thought of writing it about my dad. when i just had graduated 8th grade my father had thrown a big graduation party for me and my sisters on the same day that my best friend was having her graduation party, i fought with him so much and we had a silent ride back to his house for the party ( because my parents are divorced ) well later that day at the party i physically saw my dad having a heart attack and i will never forget what that did to me.. i really just need help getting started to keep the reader hooked... so help would be great.. thankssss 