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TheJamMasterJ

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OK so it's me again for those of you who remember my last one but don't forget I'm only 14 so I'm working out the kinks but this is like the 9th song I've written. This is also written to a beat.

President Jamal...all up in the office, four more years up in the office cuz elections never lost it
like to speak in future tense to when I'm a militant
specializing in destroying all evil because I am heaven sent.
Man I'll drop a nuke here then I'll drop a nuke there
here a nuke there a nuke, nukes everywhere
Walk up in the house throw on new clothes then I'm out
Don't play wit me boy and don't even try to diss
cuz I'll have your kidneys backed up and you standing in some piss
All of y'all takin shots but every one of them a miss
assassinating all my enemy's like this is Shinler's list
And if im not the best 14 year old theres something that i missed
When i come through your city know I come fully equipt
turn everything black and white like a damn eclipse
Ya im going dumb on this track cuz it is veterans day
my boys come into your city like a gangsta parade, yeah...

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this is only the first verse the second verse is almost finished. If you wanna read it just let me know in your reply.
@ Marissa maybe it sounds familiar because I wrote it to Veterans Day - rick Ross ft. Lil Wayne & Birdman
 
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