Care to expand your limits a little? C/C on this poetry please?

You know i'm a strong believer in a imagination right? Without rhyme, mostly. What do you see here? I hope it's not just nonsense words here.

Push these fences further away,
to increase the circumference.
Fight past a line, human painted,
and warp your taken universe.
Rid yourself of common ideals
and take the plunge through a stale mind.
To crash on a world unpainted
a free thinker, a world divine
in sumptuous imagination.

Beyond a star, beyond the walls
fitted by sceptic constructors.
Their shackles may be tightly gripped,
but independence is your key.
What's blank, may be as simple as
a colour by numbers, vivid.

Let free and turn the artists page,
is human logic our true cage?
Thank you Dee?, the way you write some of your responses, it's structure isn't unlike a poem in itself!
Well I did splash out on a new dictionary a couple of weeks back but I didn;'t use it for this! Woo, a triumph I believe. Thank you Humpty!

I'm gonna thank everyone seperately, even if they throw abuse at me!
Thanks Passion, that means a lot! Well it makes me smile anyway.
 
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