Care to comment on these lyrics I wrote?

joshmcnulty86

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And It All( working title possibly may change)

Verse one:
You could of had it all
Or are you too small?
Is it all too much
Do you ever stand tall?
You could of found it all
To be a joke
Could you in the meanwhile
Give up your ghosts
Morning blooms
And the oceans sing
Whatever it is
We stay alive
It could of been a street
Paved in everyones name
But your own
Center stage and the exits are clear
Open the door
And the storms are all still there

Verse two:
You could of had the sun
But you went out too soon
What's that there
Sitting in your eye
Two black holes
Like diamonds in the sky
I jumped in the river
To see what I could find
The whole universe
All across and to the other side
You could of had it all
Or are you to small
To big to pick yourself up

Chorus:
Maybe the strangers
Are you and me
Maybe the bloom
Comes too soon
Maybe it all
Is for everyone
But ourselves
 
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