Care to comment on an aimless poem?

[*Jellz*]

*etheree form encouraged by an Evadne poem (different theme)

My island she is my teacher
by Jellz Fisher


Cold
windswept
island home
surrounds me with
enough Ocean’s love
to sustain my soul
through earthly trials which taunt
to forgo my aimless longings.

In silent tribute I walk her tracks
waiting on wisdom I know she will teach.

 

[Elaine P...is for Poetry]

That's the way I feel about my island, too -- and about Ocean.