i am not a native english speaker,some parts of my essay sound awkward...can native speaker help me find the mistakes and write it better?Profuse thanks in advance!
1.People are very likely to be adversely affected by words form others.They should perceive something thoroughly and not take others' view for granted when they decide on doing it.
2.Although information does offer certain advantages to help people make decisions,it also interfere with our indispensable concern according to our own distinct situation.
3.They held firmly their own ideas concerned about their reality.(I mean they dont take others' advice for they know their own situation best.)
1.People are very likely to be adversely affected by words form others.They should perceive something thoroughly and not take others' view for granted when they decide on doing it.
2.Although information does offer certain advantages to help people make decisions,it also interfere with our indispensable concern according to our own distinct situation.
3.They held firmly their own ideas concerned about their reality.(I mean they dont take others' advice for they know their own situation best.)