Terror
As he nears to the door
His footsteps lacking rhythm, so drunk
More terror
Your heart squeezes,
You pray,
Pray for your life for it is in danger.
The squeak of the door opening
You can’t help it, you whimper.
The roar of a lion fills the whole house with fury
He stomps, yelling you’re name. . .
“What to do? What to do?”
Thoughts streak through your brain
Hoping you can escape your beating today.
You hide, but he finds you.
The game cat and mice. . .
Where mice cannot win, no matter how they try.
After he’s done with you,
You sit there,
In shock
But suddenly tremors pass through you. . .
And you weep. . .
Weep for your unborn child, who never will see the world as it is,
And weep for the future that won’t be much brighter than today ever was.
I am 13 and need to write a poem for school. Also, can anyone give me suggestions on how to fix it? Thanks!
As he nears to the door
His footsteps lacking rhythm, so drunk
More terror
Your heart squeezes,
You pray,
Pray for your life for it is in danger.
The squeak of the door opening
You can’t help it, you whimper.
The roar of a lion fills the whole house with fury
He stomps, yelling you’re name. . .
“What to do? What to do?”
Thoughts streak through your brain
Hoping you can escape your beating today.
You hide, but he finds you.
The game cat and mice. . .
Where mice cannot win, no matter how they try.
After he’s done with you,
You sit there,
In shock
But suddenly tremors pass through you. . .
And you weep. . .
Weep for your unborn child, who never will see the world as it is,
And weep for the future that won’t be much brighter than today ever was.
I am 13 and need to write a poem for school. Also, can anyone give me suggestions on how to fix it? Thanks!