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Ruthie M
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im learning to write poetry.can you tell me how to improve on this poem?
Say hello, to midnights dawn.
Im sure it wont,last for long.
Before you know it,midnights gone.
And you will hear,the morning song.
You take a blade,hold it to your throat.
But do not cut,for I will cry.
Memories will flood,memories will float.
And somewhere inside,I will die.
If you were gone,I'd feel so alone.
Like time had stopped,and the world was still.
Regular life,I wouldn't have known.
I would turn to evil,and start to kill.
I love you,from the bottom of my heart.
I never want to lose you,never want to hurt you.
I'll always protect you,with every little part.
Doesnt matter,what they do.
I will never,let you go.
I love you more,everyday.
I just want,to let you know.
I love you more,than words can say.
Say hello, to midnights dawn.
Im sure it wont,last for long.
Before you know it,midnights gone.
And you will hear,the morning song.
You take a blade,hold it to your throat.
But do not cut,for I will cry.
Memories will flood,memories will float.
And somewhere inside,I will die.
If you were gone,I'd feel so alone.
Like time had stopped,and the world was still.
Regular life,I wouldn't have known.
I would turn to evil,and start to kill.
I love you,from the bottom of my heart.
I never want to lose you,never want to hurt you.
I'll always protect you,with every little part.
Doesnt matter,what they do.
I will never,let you go.
I love you more,everyday.
I just want,to let you know.
I love you more,than words can say.