I meant to say "These Schools are unable to Contact him.."
Is the sentence structure okay and can you please correct any grammar mistakes. ( i usually don't write a lot)
Hello,
Few weeks ago my son, John, had his phone taken away by an administrator. He told me that I would need to come to school to pick it up. I am not able to leave my house because I do not drive. Recently, John has applied to several colleges and the only number he gave them was his cell phone number. These schools are unable to him because of this situation . John has expressed deep remorse and promises not to take out his cell phone again. So if you would please, return his cell phone.
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Is the sentence structure okay and can you please correct any grammar mistakes. ( i usually don't write a lot)
Hello,
Few weeks ago my son, John, had his phone taken away by an administrator. He told me that I would need to come to school to pick it up. I am not able to leave my house because I do not drive. Recently, John has applied to several colleges and the only number he gave them was his cell phone number. These schools are unable to him because of this situation . John has expressed deep remorse and promises not to take out his cell phone again. So if you would please, return his cell phone.
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