jesssssssica :)
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I'm an amature poet, just starting. could you please read my poem?
thanks heaps in advance
A RELIGIOUS EXPERIENCE
To lay alone all hot and dreary
Make me happy to be existing here
Be cautious though, do not be weary
To explore and learn and lear
No need to wear the shoes of another
Let the blood viscerally drip
Let not images of mother
Come and disturb your grip
Forgiveness- bah- it’s oh so real
Make the heart beat and stop and start
Oh nothing to at least feel
Thrown like a dart
An epitome of religion
Wings to stop a pigeon.
thanks heaps in advance
A RELIGIOUS EXPERIENCE
To lay alone all hot and dreary
Make me happy to be existing here
Be cautious though, do not be weary
To explore and learn and lear
No need to wear the shoes of another
Let the blood viscerally drip
Let not images of mother
Come and disturb your grip
Forgiveness- bah- it’s oh so real
Make the heart beat and stop and start
Oh nothing to at least feel
Thrown like a dart
An epitome of religion
Wings to stop a pigeon.