can you please rate my rap/poem verse?

meeting you at the club,getting drunk showing nothing but love
writing your number as you give me a hug,thinking to myself i might be in luck
till the next day comes around,giving ya a call hopeing you can come to town
mad as the number doesn't work thinking what the fuck
tired being used by the ladies,being nothing but shady
knowing they secretly work for Hades,just on a mission to make babies
hoping karma kills them,hoping all the pills gets rid of them
knowing all the dudes you kiss hope you bitches get rabies
thinking im just trying to diss your game,thinking that i am fucking lame
but fuck that i just wanna light your ass like a flame,laughing while ill point the blame
having no remorse hoping your kind dies,just waving my middle finger in goodbye
just shaking my head thinking if there's a girl that cant be shamed
though no one perfect in this world,make one wrong move and things are twirled
but some acts are just to insane,seeing you act like a slut making it hard to retain
of saying my feelings of you being shady,you cant even act like a real lady
but ill patiently wait and maintain,for a real lady to have a toast of champagne
 
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