This is a poem I wrote about a spy can you please edit my poem and give me some feedback on it please?
If
If you can walk alone in the dark with no light
If you can keep a dark secret deep in your heart
If you are pathetically odd
That people can no longer bare you
If you think that a crime scene is a piece of art
If you hate your children ,
If you can look for any clue that can lead you to a sign
If you could be my ear and eye
Or keep the last bullet for you to die
If you can steal information from your enemies minds
If you always put your self in risky and unknown situations
If you can keep the guilt of others hid in your spirit
If you can know everything about me
Where I go what I d and whom I love
If you can sneak on you partners life
If you can breath the air that I inhale
If you can live in my shadow
If you can discover my lost memories
If your face is simply an empty circle
With no emotions to convey
If you are a body with no heart mind or soul
Then no doubt you're a spy
If
If you can walk alone in the dark with no light
If you can keep a dark secret deep in your heart
If you are pathetically odd
That people can no longer bare you
If you think that a crime scene is a piece of art
If you hate your children ,
If you can look for any clue that can lead you to a sign
If you could be my ear and eye
Or keep the last bullet for you to die
If you can steal information from your enemies minds
If you always put your self in risky and unknown situations
If you can keep the guilt of others hid in your spirit
If you can know everything about me
Where I go what I d and whom I love
If you can sneak on you partners life
If you can breath the air that I inhale
If you can live in my shadow
If you can discover my lost memories
If your face is simply an empty circle
With no emotions to convey
If you are a body with no heart mind or soul
Then no doubt you're a spy