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Daniel

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Here is my work. Hope you enjoy and tell me who I remind you of. I am just curious you guys rock, and God bless. Thank you for your support



One Who Was Beautiful yet Nameless

By Daniel Mapp


I will always remember our fated meeting,
The Greek's pictures was glistening upward clearly,
My sight lowered away from the coiled dragon,
To behold a place submerged within serenity,
A silent open stretch of land lied empty,
Verdantly a breeze passed over its greenness,
Suddenly my eyes beheld a slow approaching figure,
My breast launched forward pushed by thumbing,
What thing walked amongst the dewy lushness?-
Specters and boogies came to my mind,
It could have been a blacker terror,
But I remained upon that elevated hillock,
My conscious spoke stating within my mind,
“Have courage and patience don’t depart yet”,
From that spot I saw her walking gracefully,
Luna gleamed upon lengthy curled ashen hair,
Behind a bleached radiant face in innocent youth,
An indigo gown shrouded her curvy form,
I realized she was nearly upon me,
For I could make out her appearance with ease.


Symbols of luck hooped ceased mating calls,
During her soft bare feet’s careful descent,
She looked upon my weary drowsy appearance,
After dusting green fragments off her gown’s end,
“You observe what lies within the far void?”
Asking this she stood smiling before me,
Without the hint of an guile being,
“Yes I enjoy watching it’s gaseous balls.”-
I said returning her friendly mellow tone,
She looked upward to the above slowly,
“Why does he make me place it there? ,”
She said in a low sorrowful wispier,
I opened my mouth yet no word formed,
I stood there pondering over what she said,
Finally I cleared my throat and spoke softly,
“Who is this he you speak of?”
I asked with pity driving my curious words.-
She looked upon me frowning grimly,
Many moments she stood utterly speechless,
Then she spoke with rising sorrow.

“He is the one who casted me here,
Not for a rebellious reason like the snake,
But rather to keep the lit darkness governed,
For vile things creep amongst it’s shade.-
While you’re detrimental race commits black deeds,
Besides keeping the dark hours secure man,
I must direct the light into the west,
From the east I drag twinkling darkness,
These are my life’s duties yet curses sadly,
For my people’s reputation consists of sanctified beauty,
Yet I am an odd blot amongst them,
I am known for rest yet fear.-

After she spoke she reclined upon me whimpering,

My arms wrapped around her whimpering body,

“You are misunderstood by many fare one,

But me and him comprehend you seraph.”-

Her midnight hued eyes looked into mine,

Warm lips suddenly pressed against my cheek,

The east turned orange yet scarlet dawning,

She disappeared without a sound nor word,

A nightgale passed soaring overhead singing softly,

It followed the ebony night retreating far westward,

He planned that meeting the earth’s crafter,

I will always remember the our fated meeting.
 
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