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stephen r
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...realy easy ten points!? Can you please check the following for grammatical erros and if needed, please try to spice up the content. thanks
(a) I think the poet meant for this as a way to tell all the people who do the same thing every day, the ones who have let work consume them, and the people who have just flat-out given up on life that he hasn’t. He's saying, 'Hey, I'm not afraid to dream, and I don't care what you do. Ridicule me, drag me down, defeat me, but I'll always get back up and try again, because my spirit will never break. Life goes on, things change.'
(b) I think the 'values' he brings up are these:
-Dare to dream.
-Never give up.
-1000 wrongs for 1 right is worth it.
-I have an unbreakable spirit.
-Life can change; don't let your lows ruin your highs.
I believe that's what he means.
(c) The repetition builds upon the author's statements. It reinforces everything he has already stated, though not in a completely obvious way. He has a subtle approach to his repetition. Yes, it's easy to notice the 'I don't believe' lines, but where he says, 'If the sea should break the sea-wall, let the brackish water fill my heart' and 'If the land should rise from the sea again, we'll choose again to live in the heights.' I think these are ways he explains his 'never-give-in' attitude.
(a) I think the poet meant for this as a way to tell all the people who do the same thing every day, the ones who have let work consume them, and the people who have just flat-out given up on life that he hasn’t. He's saying, 'Hey, I'm not afraid to dream, and I don't care what you do. Ridicule me, drag me down, defeat me, but I'll always get back up and try again, because my spirit will never break. Life goes on, things change.'
(b) I think the 'values' he brings up are these:
-Dare to dream.
-Never give up.
-1000 wrongs for 1 right is worth it.
-I have an unbreakable spirit.
-Life can change; don't let your lows ruin your highs.
I believe that's what he means.
(c) The repetition builds upon the author's statements. It reinforces everything he has already stated, though not in a completely obvious way. He has a subtle approach to his repetition. Yes, it's easy to notice the 'I don't believe' lines, but where he says, 'If the sea should break the sea-wall, let the brackish water fill my heart' and 'If the land should rise from the sea again, we'll choose again to live in the heights.' I think these are ways he explains his 'never-give-in' attitude.