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suman
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i have to write a sonnet paying tribute to a person in black history and the person i have is locke alain he was the first to receive a scholarship. i have written the sonnet can you please make correction and give any suggestion because some of the sentence are more thank 10 syllables can you help me make the sonnet better please.it has to follow the ABABCDCDEFEFGG rhyme scheme. i have a feeling it doen't soung good could you help me put it in a way that it sounds better.please i really need help. thank you
Education is a wonderful gain
It teaches us to be helpful and kind
By which we succeed in needs or in pain
Shines the future and straightens the mind
People come to this world for a purpose
Listen to the heart, hear what it says
Follow your heart as your compass
Guide yourself the right path and ways
Greatness achieved only through excellence
Face problems with courage and dignity
Goal can be accomplished by brilliance
Accomplishment brings possibility
Alain was a winner and a great man
He was a leader and a courageous man
Education is a wonderful gain
It teaches us to be helpful and kind
By which we succeed in needs or in pain
Shines the future and straightens the mind
People come to this world for a purpose
Listen to the heart, hear what it says
Follow your heart as your compass
Guide yourself the right path and ways
Greatness achieved only through excellence
Face problems with courage and dignity
Goal can be accomplished by brilliance
Accomplishment brings possibility
Alain was a winner and a great man
He was a leader and a courageous man