ishameluvu
New member
Can you improve my grammar please and use of expression?
I had a vision; and in that vision, God said I should do something. I saw corn in the vision. At the time also, I had a little bit money in the bank. Therefore, what I decided to do is to do what the vision told me. The thing that I decided to do was to pay my tithes double one to the church and the normal tithe. Then I received another vision and the vision was saying that what I was doing was good so I should keep on doing it. Then after three days, I went to the bank and I receive a huge amount of money.
I had a vision; and in that vision, God said I should do something. I saw corn in the vision. At the time also, I had a little bit money in the bank. Therefore, what I decided to do is to do what the vision told me. The thing that I decided to do was to pay my tithes double one to the church and the normal tithe. Then I received another vision and the vision was saying that what I was doing was good so I should keep on doing it. Then after three days, I went to the bank and I receive a huge amount of money.