A Ali S New member May 20, 2010 #1 It needs 14 line ABABCDCDEFEFGG. But I am suck! so far I have. The fairy's laughter swallow the mournful crys For the gypsys scarcely reveal sins
It needs 14 line ABABCDCDEFEFGG. But I am suck! so far I have. The fairy's laughter swallow the mournful crys For the gypsys scarcely reveal sins
O opaluz New member May 20, 2010 #2 Could you, perhaps, begin with two lines explaining the connection/relationship between the fairy and the gypsy? I'm not trying to criticize, but it seems that your two lines are not the beginning of the tale, but in the middle.
Could you, perhaps, begin with two lines explaining the connection/relationship between the fairy and the gypsy? I'm not trying to criticize, but it seems that your two lines are not the beginning of the tale, but in the middle.
