Can you help me with this poem I wrote?

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Can you help me with this poem I wrote? Is it good? ?
The title is "He is a rainbow".............its a sample metaphor poem.....can you tell me if its good? And show where I can improve on?

He is a rainbow.
He is not anger.
Anger does not express himself freely.


He runs around with a bundle of joy,
Carrying it wherever he goes.
He is only one emotion
And that is rainbow.
 
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