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I just recently worte a story and i was wondering what can I do to make it sound better or more interesting?
The Story....
Thinking of the past always makes me wonder what if? Sorry, I'm getting a little ahead of myself. My name is Jake, but my baby Max calls me Jakie kins. I am only 19 years old and a boy. Although I have not always been this way. Technically i was born female. You are the only one who knows about this part of my past, not even Max knows such tales. But I'm lost with words when I look into his big gorgeous blue eyes, how can I tell him he fell for something like me? Terrified just thinking of his reactions. What if I lose him? That would be first on the list of things I never want to happen. Then again, he may understand why I kept this from him for so long and love me anyways. I hope he does. I wish there was an easy way to bring this up. Until then you are my only way too vent this matter..
well thats the first part. if you wanna read the rest go here.
Rest of the story.
http://www.quizilla.com/stories/7351802/secrets-dont-make-friends-part-one
With pics.=)
The Story....
Thinking of the past always makes me wonder what if? Sorry, I'm getting a little ahead of myself. My name is Jake, but my baby Max calls me Jakie kins. I am only 19 years old and a boy. Although I have not always been this way. Technically i was born female. You are the only one who knows about this part of my past, not even Max knows such tales. But I'm lost with words when I look into his big gorgeous blue eyes, how can I tell him he fell for something like me? Terrified just thinking of his reactions. What if I lose him? That would be first on the list of things I never want to happen. Then again, he may understand why I kept this from him for so long and love me anyways. I hope he does. I wish there was an easy way to bring this up. Until then you are my only way too vent this matter..
well thats the first part. if you wanna read the rest go here.
Rest of the story.
http://www.quizilla.com/stories/7351802/secrets-dont-make-friends-part-one
With pics.=)