HI~ Can you help to correct my reflecting writing and make the sentences logical. Thanks so much!
The news article provides two seemingly unrelated stories; in fact, there are some similarities between the two stories such the use of anti-social media as well as a dilemma that encountering less financial power and living in powerful economics. Based on this news article, account planners, or marketers always encourage people to purchase goods. But people cannot afford them what will happen. "If you buy, you will make your live better " is a message that we usually receive it from brands advertising. As a result, we are frequently encouraged to buy those goods that will make our lives better. This left a huge imagination for people to archive their ideal goal. In the London riots case, the most looting was consumer goods, because they were told to have those products. Although many people may claim that this is time for consumerism to be on the national educational curriculum, account planners still have to take responsibilities for the social disorder, and make our society sustainable.
The news article provides two seemingly unrelated stories; in fact, there are some similarities between the two stories such the use of anti-social media as well as a dilemma that encountering less financial power and living in powerful economics. Based on this news article, account planners, or marketers always encourage people to purchase goods. But people cannot afford them what will happen. "If you buy, you will make your live better " is a message that we usually receive it from brands advertising. As a result, we are frequently encouraged to buy those goods that will make our lives better. This left a huge imagination for people to archive their ideal goal. In the London riots case, the most looting was consumer goods, because they were told to have those products. Although many people may claim that this is time for consumerism to be on the national educational curriculum, account planners still have to take responsibilities for the social disorder, and make our society sustainable.