Can you help me improve my introduction for essay ? 10 points best answer?

Jess

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its on fist impressions and a play.

What can i use instead of using "my"???

My first impressions of the play "Cosi " so far.Is that it is a interesting and humorous.While compiling with these descriptions.It also highlights the significant issues that plagued the 90's.These include; war, the concept of "free love", and felidity,Whist set in a "burnt out " theater in a mental asylum.As well as this it gives an insightful view of the treatment of patients and their living conditions ,during the period.Moreover , the play gives the reader/audience a understanding ,of the complex personality's and mental illness of the patients.WHile at the same time being capricious.
 
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