Can you give me your opinion of this poem please?

So I wrote this a little over a year ago..
I made a few minor changes, but nothing drastic.
Can you tell me what you think?

Your presence is haunting;
I’m not quite sure what to do,
Every time your gone,
I find myself needing you…
It’s true…

Everyday that goes by,
I need you more and more,
Every time we speak,
My love for you grows hardcore
And you I adore

As our lives begin to intertwine,
And we become one,
The time we spend together,
Can never be outdone.
Perhaps you're "the one"

Now that we are so close,
We are constantly together,
I really hope that soon,
We will turn “Now” in to “Forever”
It will be quite an endeavor…
 
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