Can you give me some advice on my poem?

sotosocal55

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Tile:home away from home

It is not a word spoken
for i am here and so are you
smell the salt in the air an aroma that will dispel you
and enjoy the sun with a comforting warmth
the night continues on to a new world
dolphins gleam in the night light whales ,smash there tail like a crashing plane
waves wash up to tickle your feet
crashing waves ease you to sleep
for the first time at sea
 
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