Can you fix the grammer in this poem I had to write?

[Calla]

Lying breathlessly in death
Her lips a cold purple and her cheeks a snow white
She took her last drink before she said goodnight
Silently her body lye alone in room nine
Empty bottles recklessly sleep by her side
Cruelly alcohol stopped her from singing
But painlessly sung her to sleep

 

[soup]

In the fourth line, change "lye" to "lie".
In the last line, change "sung" to "sang".