Can you evaluate this poem please? What sense it makes you?

786 – 24 February 2011 – Zahid from Pakistan

MORE FACES TO MALICE ME

She was such a soft sound
Amongst jangling sounds
Those always tore my ears
Ears to listen her softy songs
Cleared in jangling sounds

Delight is in clutches of fate
Fate earned by Satan or man
No, not, never for gods, I say
Only for weaker only for man
I wish I were fate of my own!

Wish I were fate of all men!
Wish I were the fate of Satan!
Why did god create me and fate?
All together in the same time
Wish there were one from us!

I would have left her with fate
With me, else she could live
To make fate happy or to me
Different words could have been
For the pleasure of me and fate

It’s our fate that brings sounds
Jangling in church polite me
Occasional Mosque’s visits rise
Again my spirit to fight for life
To meet more faces to malice me
 
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