Can you correct or rewrite my poem?

hazaamohammed

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i hate news , widow women orphan kids , lost land ,
new dictator with mask of democracy, ruling my country
broken heart hearts shedding tears instead of eyes
haven't you read the news they condemned the massacre by international community
they killed my people in order to save my country
they deny my existence they forgot i am history
i am a land of legend i am a land of mystery
i am a land of free people i am civilization of humanity
i don't need you witness history is my witness and my geography
 
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