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MadnessPaintball
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Lol. Ok everyone, I know y'all laughed/made fun of/said i failed (lol) on my poem and I respect y'all for that. Thank you. I would rather not get laughed at for a love poem to Kacye. So I took away some things and fixed others but this time can y'all help me fix it?! Lol. She's very out going (amphius asked). So here it is again
The "....." means where I need more lines or help. Y'all do have permission to just destroy it lol like just restart the whole thing but I need help.
Kacye, I love you, you may already know.
I look at you kacye, and love how your body flows.
And when I ask you out I hope you don't say no.
We knew each other for almost a year.
And that whole year, I've loved you my dear
But asking you out was one of my fears.
You were my best friend
But that's coming to an end
.....
You'll be the best thing that ever happend to me.
When you move, your body's curves are like the sea.
Will you go out with me?
The "....." means where I need more lines or help. Y'all do have permission to just destroy it lol like just restart the whole thing but I need help.
Kacye, I love you, you may already know.
I look at you kacye, and love how your body flows.
And when I ask you out I hope you don't say no.
We knew each other for almost a year.
And that whole year, I've loved you my dear
But asking you out was one of my fears.
You were my best friend
But that's coming to an end
.....
You'll be the best thing that ever happend to me.
When you move, your body's curves are like the sea.
Will you go out with me?