can this consider as a poetry?

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it can be considered as poetry.

good job.keep it up.but you can still improve a lot.improve your vocabulary if you are grown up.if you are a kid or a teenager,it's fine.
 
At the magnificent view of Arizona valley
I looked up and down at the place I never dreamed to go
Grand Canyon
It was 2000, the first time I visited the United States
I never imagine coming to place like this.
The sun was striking down at me like an arrow
But I gave a big simile to my dad, as he took this photo
I was very curious since it was my first time coming here and I was very young
I asked the tour guide many questions
It was hard to believe how they formed
I want to go to here again and take a photo on the same place and pose.
 
it can be considered as poetry.

good job.keep it up.but you can still improve a lot.improve your vocabulary if you are grown up.if you are a kid or a teenager,it's fine.
 
it can be considered as poetry.

good job.keep it up.but you can still improve a lot.improve your vocabulary if you are grown up.if you are a kid or a teenager,it's fine.
 
it can be considered as poetry.

good job.keep it up.but you can still improve a lot.improve your vocabulary if you are grown up.if you are a kid or a teenager,it's fine.
 
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