can someone tell me what they think of my poem :)?

Breska H

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dont want any mean comments. just tell me what you think..its for gr.12 english..im doing it in summer school. THANK YOU :D
make any corrections if you want to!

I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.
I wonder what makes a novel truly great.
I hear the incessant voice of my conscience whisper at my ear.
I see the single blade of grass that remains still in the summer breeze.
I want to travel back in time to relive that special night.
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.

I pretend I am the audacious heroine in a hit action movie.
I feel honoured to be a Canadian.
I touch the very depths of the ocean without ever leaving my seat.
I worry I may wake up one day to learn he was only a dream.
I cry for the people of my homeland who are suffering in the hands of the Sinhalese.
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.

I understand that God is with me and will forever guide me in the right direction.
I say follow your passion and you will never have any regrets.
I dream of the day I become the prestigious author of a timeless classic.
I try my ultimate best to not fall asleep in History class.
I hope this summer never ends.
I am a shy girl who speaks only when the time is right.
 
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