can someone read my poem and tell me what they think about it... ten points?

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Allie

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tic tok, like a broken clock,
aint so unusual, so why am i confusing you,
hold on to that thought.........
its clearly oh so simple,
and its likely that im missing you too

Cuz your the missing puzzle piece thats been lying on my floor,
and i noticed you as soon as i stepped into that door

I see a hurricane up ahead,
and thinking that were gonna be dead,
but for some reason it's passing over our heads
i see the rain drops hitting the ground,
the whole sky is crashing down,
but we run in that crystal shower,
even if that rainbow never comes out

And our song is a lullaby,
with flashing neon lights

We lay on our blankets of green,
making wishes on shooting airplanes,
smiling at his humorous laugh, gold specks in his eyes,
him looking at my soft smile,
his lips like a lullaby,
mine like flashing neon lights


oh and if ur wonderin what i mean by shooting airplanes i mean well.....where i live u dont really see the stars too often because of all the lights but quite often ill be like "oh look a star" and it actually ends up being just an airplane
 
Tic Toc I hear a clock
The time does chime , and I don't give a dime
Time to sing a song, and I will get along
Ding Dong a song and now good bye so long
 
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